This is part two of notes from a planned podcast called The
Compulsive Writer’s Support Group. It will be available on my official
website, www.mindofbryan.com,
as well as via a link here. In this section I’m going to talk about the
three-act structure of film. I believe this might be a good way to give
structure to a novel, especially a shorter Nanowrimo sized novel.
Screenwriters and filmmakers employ a couple different structures:
acts and reels. These are simultaneous structures, and I’m much more
used to thinking in acts.
In terms of reels, let’s imagine that every movie is 90-120 minutes.
This number works for most films. There is a physical limit to how much
film we can load onto a projector, and that’s something like 20
minutes. That is a reel. I hear reels being used more in pitching a
movie, and producers like to hear very significant things about the
first reel, explosions, car chases, a body, whatever really gets the
action going. Most acts wind up being two reels in length. If we think
about it, most movies have a very significant plot point 15-20 minutes
in. Maybe this is a good number for the average movie viewer, the point
where we make a decision whether this movie is worth another hour or
so, and so we put something major here, just to keep the viewer
interested. After this point, we’ve got them.I don’t think we can as
writers of novels think in reels, but there are lessons to be learned
in the reel. First, the inciting incident needs to come early. There is
no better way to lose readers than to bog them down with exposition
early. Second, as a smaller division of time, we can think about
whether we have the right balance of action, story, character
development and plot for a given breakdown of time or pages.
Let’s move on to acts.
There are almost invariably three acts to every screenplay. I
suppose you could make a case that Brazil has a fourth act tacked on,
and there might be others, but this is the exception to the rule. Acts
can be thought of in terms of action, or they can be thought of
thematically, or you can think about them as they apply to a
character’s development. Thinking about one will often lead you to the
others, or you can think of them in conjunction. If you want some
support for the theory of a fractal story structure, a film script has
three acts, and larger stories that are written at one time are most
often trilogies.
There are basic standards for what each act does, however, and
knowing them gives us our story’s main structure. Act One is
introduction. It introduces the world, the characters, the
relationships of those characters, and the problem. Act two is
complication. We put more obstacles in front of our hero. Act three is
resolution.
Once I have thought about those, I’ll come up with actions and themes to lay over them.
So let’s look at our standard model, Star Wars, for some structural
analysis. In terms of on screen actions, the first act of Star Wars
establishes the entire series. Since we have a three-fold plot (Empire,
Rebellion and Force) we have three main story lines in each act. In act
one, Leia gets captured, which in this case represents both the Empire
and Rebellion storyline. The Force reaches out in the form of two
droids who bring the secret plans to Luke and Obiwan. We meet Han and
Chewie, and we escape from the planet. We end the act with Luke
beginning his training in the Force, and the destruction of Dantooine.
I choose this point because it brings us to see the larger conflict,
back to the Rebellion and the Empire, and we see just what is at stake.
Up to this point, the conflict is hinted at, but not fully elucidated.
This keeps the viewer interested in something that was at the time a
very foreign idea, and through what is kind of dull in many respects,
even though it is necessary storytelling.
The first act is about foundation and problem. We establish all of
the characters, lay out the problem of the story, and set the
characters on their way. There are mechanical elements of the story,
the plot, and there’s a higher goal, theme. A free writer who has a
basic story in their heads might be able to write a three word outline,
with a single word for each act, and that might provide sufficient
guidance and structure to move on. For example, in terms of theme in
the first act of Star Wars, I’d call it initiation. The story is
getting going, Luke is initiated into the Force, Han is brought into
the Rebellion, the viewer is being initiated into the universe. The
viewer is a very important consideration. Remember that in 1977, this
kind of movie was unheard of. If Lucas had moved too quickly over this
part of the movie, the viewer might have been turned off. Walls had to
be broken down in order for us to understand and care for these
characters.
In terms of Character, I’ll argue that the whole series is about
Luke. In this act, Luke is isolated both geographically (or well,
spatially) from the rest of the universe, and mentally. He has no
connection with the conflict, nor with the Force.
Let’s not forget to mention that this act has a small climax in the
escape from Mos Eisely. It is a little climax, because we don’t want to
blow our load just yet, there is a lot more story to tell.
The second act is about complication. A simple mission, fly a couple
of people and a couple of droids somewhere, becomes a save our butt and
rescue the princess operation.
In the second act, the conflicts meet head to head as Luke and Han
are captured by the Death Star, infiltrate, rescue Leia, escape, and
Obi-wan is killed. There is a three part story here as well, Obi-wan
disarms the Tractor beams, Luke and Han save the princess, and the
droids man the computers. This is the action. Our second climax of the
movie is the escape.
Thematically, we go much more dark in this act, as we find out how
ruthless the Empire is. Escape is the action, the theme is defiance of
tyranny. If the only hope is to get off the Death Star with the plans,
success is the only option.
In terms of Luke, the story is entanglement. He suddenly finds
himself an integral part of the struggle for the galaxy, a position he
wanted to be in. He also finds out how difficult it can be to be in
this position. He has just grown a little bit more into a man, and he
gets a lot less whiney and becomes more forceful (no pun intended).
These are examples of how the character develops.
The third act becomes conflict resolution and climax. The third act
is where the story turn from being captured and chased to the Rebellion
going on the offensive. The attack on the Death Star is planned.
Thematically, this act is about turning the tables around. We see
that the Rebellion is capable and formidable, and the antithesis of the
Empire in every way.
For Luke, he grows from erstwhile farm hand turned adventurer into a warrior.
When we write, our first hints of story are often world, character,
or conflict. Thinking about this seedling in three parts can definitely
give an early bit of structure that won’t get in the way of the organic
writer, and is a first step towards the outline for the structure
writer. I believe that this three act structure can be applied to
nearly any book, film, game, or story. For the beginning writer,
thinking about this is not second nature. I was never taught structure
like this in college. We spent more time on character, dialogue,
setting, all important things, but in the ten week terms we had, we
never got into anything larger than short stories, and so we talked
about larger scale structures. I had to learn this from screenwriting
books and apply it to long form writing. Thinking in terms of these
kinds of acts will help a story jump from a directionless and shapeless
story to a dynamic tale. Also, for somebody about to take on their
first project of length, knowing this simple shape might help the book
feel shorter just by way of being a map to the end.
Now that you know this structure, as you watch movies, you’ll be able to pick up on the moments that make up the three acts.
Now, I’m not saying that we need to be a slave to three acts in our
books like a writer is in a screenplay. Turn in a book with five acts,
and a publisher will judge it on its own merit. Turn in a screenplay
with five acts and a producer will throw you out of the office as an
amateur. What is most important to this line of thinking is that each
act starts in one place, goes someplace else, and ends on a significant
turning point event. Sometimes an understanding of this can be just
what a writer needs to go ahead and write a book.
To put this in terms of something I’m writing now, Inside, I’m not
sure how many acts I have in any of the three books. I’m guessing it is
more like four rather than three. They are each designed with a rise in
action to a specific point at which the conflict is returned to a
baseline point, and it all begins anew, and as I outlined, I always had
the next major plot event in mind. That was the direction I wrote in.
I’m not somebody who can start in the middle and work out. I always
start at the beginning and work to the end. It’s just my way.
In part three, I’ll look at some structures borrowed from the theatre.