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a love poem.

 

A LOVE POEM,by:autumnhope byess.

Do you see this love right before your eyes?

Im right here, no more struggle to survive.

I will always be apart of you.

Put your guard down, and let me through.

I swear on my life I would never hurt you.

You make me happy, you make me smile.

For you I would walk a million miles.

If loving you is a crime, lock me up I will do the time.

It hurts so much to see you sad,

when your not here I want you so bad.

Your my everything cant you see?

I need this love to always be.

I need you right here beside me.

When times are tough, I will not turn,

trust our love, you soon will learn

life means nothing without you,

I can only trust that this is true.

Now its time for me to go,

but these are things my love should know.

Published Saturday, January 09, 2010 8:44 AM by lunalovegood
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Comments

 

lunalovegood said:

please leave me comments and tell me what you think.

i am a young writer, and need to know if this is any good.

i am only fifteen, and know absolutly nothing about love,

but when i put pencil to paper, all kind of thoughts come out.

please leave suggestions on how to make better,

or what you think, thank you very much

       sincerly, Luna LG

January 10, 2010 9:05 AM
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